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I went trick-or-treating with my best friends Pisith, Rothanak, and Combo. Our pillowcases were full of candy, and it was getting late, so my friends wanted to go bake home.

I wanted more candy so I turned to my friends and said, “Let’s knock on a few more doors and then head for home.”

They were worried because they thought it was already too late. “Let’s go home now,” they said to me. I told them not to worry because we could take a shortcut through the old forest.

So after a few more houses, I took my friends to the path that went through the forest. We walked for about 5 or 7 minutes and then, suddenly, I felt very strange. I couldn’t remember the way! It was dark and foggy. We were lost. And to make matters worse, it started to rain. And then, it started to pour. Lightning lit up the sky and the big sound of the thunder filled in the forest. We wandered around in the rain for over two hours. We were scared and cried . And then, at about midnight, I saw an old abandoned house on a hill.

“I think we’ll have to spend the night in that old house and wait till morning,” I said.

My friends didn’t think it was a good idea, but they were cold and wet, so they agreed. We walked up the old wooden steps to the front door. The door creaked open and we went inside, sat down, and started to eat a chocolate bar, when we were in this house we heard some noise form the small room and than we all ran though the small room but we didn't see anything.We all was worried and wanted to go back home.Suddenly we can see one of the old man was coming inside the house and asked why you came here and why you stayed in my house.

One of my friend name Pisith said we came to this house because we can't remember the way to go back home so please help me to find the way to go back home.The old man said don't worry all of you came here and drink some water and than I will tell you the way to get back home."Talk the old man" is the owner of this house but he was died along time ago all of the person who came in this house can't came out and die in this house.

All my friend parents and my parent was worried about us because they can't see we came back home a few minutes ago all of they went to the forest to find me and my friends.

Talk about me and my friends when we all finish drink the water we all are faint because in the water is poison the old man take me and my friends to the bed and he wanted to kill all of we but suddenly but it was lucky my parent and my friend parents were came to this house and shouted and than they all was fight with this old man.

In the end the old man was dead and we all wake up and came back to the house.

Pour :flow in a stream.
Wonder:a state of mind produced by something unexpected or extraordinary.
Shortcut:a quicker way between two places.
Abandoned:shameless.