In Cambodia have a big flooding .This year is very bad thing for people live Cambodia. All provinces are flooding all .Many people don't have home some people have I think last year we don't have flooding,but this year have a big flooding .Many people don't have anything to eat and don't have place for stay .
And I saw reach people went to get some food and help they are to have a house but,many people were die because they don't have anything to eat and some people were die by flooding . Every day people see the water get higher.At night they can't sleep because there are dangerous animals and morning they can't sleep also because have many water if they sleep they must sleep on the water .
The last if many people were die we must say "GOD come to Cambodia and Help Help! we are .They think god come and help them but, God don't come. One day people die about ten persons and they don't believe that . they think this year is crazy year .
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ReplyDeleteLook at this sentence *In Cambodia have a big flooding.*
Better would be *In Cambodia there is a lot of flooding*
Thanks for writing a story about something that is happening in Cambodia right now!
But where is your label so I know who you are?
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