Wednesday 2 November 2011

On Halloween Day


I went trick-or-treating with my best friends Van Persie, Gervinho, and Ramsey. Our pillowcases were full of candy, and it was getting late, so my friends _wanted to do tomorrow.

I wanted to finish now, so I turned to my friends and said, “Let’s knock on a few more doors and then head for home.”

They were worried because they thought it was already too late. “Let’s go home now,” they said to me. I told them not to worry because we could take a shortcut through the old forest.

So after a few more houses, I took my friends to the path that went through the forest. We walked for about twenty minutes and then, suddenly, I felt very strange. I couldn’t remember the way! It was dark and foggy. We were lost. And to make matters worse, it started to rain. And then, it started to pour. Lightning lit up the sky and some thunders. We wandered around in the rain for over two hours. We were scaring. And then, at about midnight, I saw an old abandoned house on a hill.

“I think we’ll have to spend the night in that old house and wait till morning,” I said.


My friends didn’t think it was a good idea, but they were cold and wet, so they agreed. We walked up the old wooden steps to the front door. The door creaked open and we went inside, sat down, and started to eat a chocolate bar, when we were eating ,I saw many shadows on the wall.Then I told my friends to look at the wall but there were nothing.I thought i couldn't see clearly .We continued to walk in the house. The house was full of pictures and furnitures . When We went to the Living Room ,It was a wide room . I looked at the picture of a woman ,Wow! I shouted . The woman on the pictures was smiling to me.Suddenly we wanted to ran out of the room but there was no door . I told my friends to go through the wall. When we ran out of the house , there were alots of people infront of us and then we fainted on the floor.In the morning our parents went to bring us home and we told them about the story.
Pour : to rain alot
Wander: walk slowly
shortcut:fast way
Abandoned:the house that no people live or empty house.

3 comments:

  1. Hey, Van Persie is a friend of mine,too!!

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  2. The last paragraph of your story is very well done, Mr. Hong Heng!

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  3. it is a strange s tory i ever met

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