THE secret house with the evil woman

I went trick-or-treating with my best friends friend, sister, and brother. Our pillowcases were full of candy, and it was getting late, so my friends afraid

I wanted relax so I turned to my friends and said, “Let’s knock on a few more doors and then head for home.”

They were worried because they thought it was already too late. “Let’s go home now,” they said to me. I told them not to worry because we could take a shortcut through the old forest.

So after a few more houses, I took my friends to the path that went through the forest. We walked for about 15min and then, suddenly, I felt very strange. I couldn’t remember the way! It was dark and foggy. We were lost. And to make matters worse, it started to rain. And then, it started to pour. Lightning lit up the sky and wind so fast . We wandered around in the rain for over two hours. We were cold. And then, at about midnight, I saw an old abandoned house on a hill.

“I think we’ll have to spend the night in that old house and wait till morning,” I said.


My friends didn’t think it was a good idea, but they were cold and wet, so they agreed. We walked up the old wooden steps to the front door. The door creaked open and we went inside, sat down, and started to eat a chocolate bar,
suddenly..!the old woman was shouting ''hey!stop!!!Don't eat my chocolate!!!you will die now!!!!!'' my friend and i so afraid and then we said''sorry sorry i don't know.because we so hungry.don't kill me.m so sorry...'' when we stopped say we cried.....But the evil woman she shout to us''hahaha i will kill of you now! you will die..you go to my house with no agree!so you look down on me! and you eat my chocolate...Now you know the reason that why i kill u..!!!''
when the old woman stopped say she ran to us.one of my friend was fail so the woman caught him and shout''I WILL EAT U'' so my brother and my sister came to near she and fought her!my friend and i tried to find stick and hit on her body!and then the evil body's woman was fail so we ran away from she..!and tried to ran ran ran until we met a house and people..!
*pour:fail,example:pour water, the rain are pour.
*wander:travel that no limited..place to place.
*shortcut: the short way that easy to find.
*abandoned:forsake, no need to use.